Age/Gender: 17, Male
Location: Somewhere in Bogota
Job: photographer
I'm just staring into the sun....
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Exp. Points: 400 / 550
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6 Reviews | 5 w/ Responses
Solid, tight, and best of all, IT'S ACTUALLY TECHNO!!! Great piece man, and maybe you might read my comment, maybe not, but I do want to mention just why you got a nine out of ten here.
First, this song is too short for its merit (yeah, that's right). So try to build up on that. Second, within your extension of the song, I think you'd have a better chance at allowing a larger rise to the climax, where you burst out with a large KA-BOOM at the end. That's MY opinion, but either way, that's how it goes.
Wondeful music. And I hope my review was somewhat constructive. Maybe.
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It sounds pretty darn stankin' good so far, and I highly suggest you keep it up! Also, by the sound of your voice I can already tell you sure as hell can sing, but what's bringing you down is probably the correct recording equipment (or maybe that's just me?) Anyway, its crisp, clean, to point, and down right blues-sy.
New artist/musician I'm going to keep an eye on now. ;D
Author's Response:
wow thanks soooo much. yeah i used my lappy mic, and garageband.
thanks again
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Look, I know you probably get a lot of criticism saying this sounds a bit like your typical off-the-top-of-your-head song that's just going to pop next when you hit that button on your ipod, but hey, I feel this song was made to speak that out with jizzy spank-ons (no nasty thoughts intended). So give yourself a pat on the back, go make some more music, and keep this appetizing stuff coming.
You just earned yourself another fan. :D
Author's Response:
wow i'm really glad you like it...
somehow i'm getting a lot of views in the last days :P
thanks!
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DO. NOT. BE. AFRAID.
I can hear hear you shy away at so many parts of the song, but don't do that. Please, don't ever do it again. In this world, only a handful of people can really carry a tune, and guess what? Your a person in a handful of people that can SING. SO SING, DAMMIT. Your voice merges with the sounds in the song, and it sounds awesome. It seems like your backing away every time you smack your lips together to shout away some tasty lyrics. But you shouldn't do that; if anything, you should be feeling powerful when your singing, cuz this stuff is jizzy. And I think you know what I mean.
Make yourself a legend, guy; you can do it.
Author's Response:
Give it another listen.
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There's so many stories behind this cold, cold winter, buried beneath deeps of frost in the mouth of an evolving mankind. I don't know exactly what you were thinking when you composed this, but I want to say it: I've listened hard enough to hear the depression in an old man's heart as he crosses the street on winter's day; I've heard children having snow ball fights in the midst of the final season's start; The anxiety ring in a woman's head as her lover crosses her path on the way home from work. And I love to notice things like that. And you did this with nothing but the pure might of music.
Thank you for bringing a slight wave of warmth to me during this dull summer; you just made someone smile at the cross of guilt and pleasure. So for a quickly updated fan, please, don't stop writing poetry.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback! I think your thoughts fit pretty well into the scenario that I imagined for this piece. I'm really glad to hear you enjoyed it!
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It sounds professional, gives a majestic vibe in the hips, and if anyone's foot ain't taping to the beat, then you have issues...
Don't. Stop. Ever. With. Your. Music.
Author's Response:
Thanks man. I try.
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